Dropping Arts and Sports

Subjects such as Art, Sport and Music are being dropped from the school curriculum for subjects such as Information Technology. Many people children suffer as a result of these changes. To what extent would you support or reject the idea of moving these subjects from school curriculum?


Subjects like art, sport and music nurture the talents and creativity of students in school. Removing such subjects from the curriculum would definitely have a negative impact on the physical and psychological development of children of that age group. Hence, I would completely object to(reject) the idea of removing these subjects, even if it is to fit in important subjects like Information Technology.

Firstly, the purpose of education is not only to develop the academic ability of students but also to nurture their creative talents and sporting abilities, leading to the comprehensive growth of the personality of an individual. If the above disciplines are removed from school syllabus in order to accommodate new subjects, the real purpose of education would be defeated and it would be limited to academic pursuits alone. For example, if schools do not give opportunity to children who are gifted in music, dance and sports to develop their skills, it would certainly stunt the inborn talents. Apart from school hours, they hardly get a chance to engage in such activities. Hence, school authorities should ensure that sufficient time is given to sport, arts and related activities, in spite of the pressure from new subjects.

Secondly, if school hours are completed packed with academic subjects children would hardly get time to refresh their mind. This would mean that creative and recreational activities like music and sports would give them time to unload their pressures of academic studies and examinations. Furthermore, the opportunity to engage in activities of their interest would make education an enjoyable experience for children. For instance, most children are delighted in participating in sports after tedious hours of academic studies. It would also rejuvenate their minds and help them to get back to their studies.

Finally, the study of academic subjects hardly gives any room for developing socialisation skills, team work and leadership qualities. Children acquire such attributes by participating in extracurricular activities. To cite an instance, a team sport like soccer or a musical concert would help children to coordinate team activities and take up leadership.

On the other hand, there are people who argue that there is no harm in dropping extracurricular activities in order to find space for new subjects like information technology. They contend that these new subjects are inevitable for children to develop their academic careers and they should find time apart from school hours to engage in non-academic pursuits. However, this reasoning does not seem to be very convincing as much of after-school hours are packed with home work or other academic projects. Apart from that, facilities and opportunities for such activities are very limited away from school.

In conclusion, school authorities should find a suitable way to fit in subjects like information technology, without downplaying the importance of arts and sports.

(Words in italics are examples of the 'skill of cohesion' and words in bold letters are to be studied as part of 'vocabulary'. Structures given in both italics and bold letters require special attention from students.).
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Televised Sports

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:

The amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having an impact on live sports events.   Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.


Televised sports, both recorded and live, have become a major form of entertainment for millions of sports lovers in the recent years.  It definitely has an impact on live sports events that are conducted in stadiums, both positively and negatively.

On the one hand, the thrill of watching a match with thousands of spectators can hardly be experienced in the privacy of one’s television screen.  For instance, people cheer their favourite teams, sing patriotic chants and dress up in fancy clothes during a match, whereas such euphoric experience of mass entertainment is absent in televised sports.  Moreover, many sports fans greatly cherish watching their favourite sports heroes in person.  Again, many accuse television sports to be addictive in nature, as many people, especially children waste long hours glued to television sets, without engaging in any productive activities.

On the other hand, there are greater benefits to televised sports, which has made sports one of the most popular forms of entertainment of the present era.  Firstly, television has made sports accessible to millions of people across the globe, while sports venues are restricted to only a limited number of people.  For example, when the world cup football is held, millions of soccer fans all around the world watch it in the comfort of their homes.  If not televised, it would deny them the opportunity of enjoying such an important sports event.  Secondly, television has played a significant role in substantially increasing the popularity of many sports like cricket, badminton and hockey.  Thirdly, a televised sport is more appealing to many viewers because of the superior technological features like close up and slow motion visuals, expert commentaries and statistics, which make it very interesting.  Finally, the huge amount of revenue generated through television rights and advertisements has made sports an important economic activity, benefiting both the players and the organisers.

In the final analysis, the increasing coverage given to sports on television has been greatly beneficial for sports in general, and its growing influence suggests that, its negative impacts are negligible.
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